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Opinion - James J. Kilpatrick

TRYING A LITTLE TOO HARD

Sun Aug 24, 8:01 PM ET

Today's rumination stems from this proposition: As writers, sometimes we try too hard.

  • THE WILD GERUND AND OTHER CRITTERS Sun Aug 17, 8:01 PM ET

    In certain forms of literary composition, nothing is more important than the opening sentence. It's the baited hook, the magic aroma, the half-opened door. A delightful example of this irresistible device turned up the other day in The Wall Street Journal. Its lead editorial began:

  • WHAT IS THE NUMBER OF 'NUMBER'? Sun Aug 10, 8:01 PM ET

    Writers learn at least one rule of prose composition in their cradles: Subject and predicate must agree in number. It's a splendid rule -- but what if the subject is "number"?

  • IF YOU WERE A COPY EDITOR Sun Aug 3, 8:02 PM ET

    If all you latent copy editors will gather 'round, the quiz will begin. The first question deals with punctuation in possessive constructions. Don't go away! These sentences plop upon your desk: